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Beautiful writing Simone. In the safety of dreams, one can freely let go and experience the depth of their true desire. You portray this perfectly.

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

Simone - wow!

I’m not sure (when I read you early episodes on Medium) whether this prologue hit my radar but I love it!

It promises much & explains nothing- just right for hooking a reader (this reader!)

You maintain the dreamy quality of the scene perfectly, and from Kate’s pleasure & eager responses to everything that happens, leave us in no doubt that she’s a sensual woman who is in touch with her sexuality & her libido.

I love the sketchy nature of her partner- is he real or conjured from her arousal? Is he benevolent or malevolent? Is she entering into a submissive contract with him or is he feeding off her energy in some way?

Of course the reader is curious about what has sparked this type of dream, and how deeply embroiled Kate will become in this plane of nebulous encounters with carnal pleasure as their focus. But I am sure I’m not the only one keen to read more.

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