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Quill Elowen's avatar

Mary’s dual consciousness and inner dialogue with her darker self is delicious. I can’t wait to find out how she satisfies herself. She has such a succubus vibe. And Isabella’s inherited family asset the idea is thrilling.

Simone Francis's avatar

A lot of my stories have a succubus theme to them. I've set myself quite a challenge here but it's quite fun to write. Thanks for your comments

Finding my path's avatar

I really like where this is going Simone.

Simone Francis's avatar

My first response was going to be 'I wish I knew' (where it is going). I'm almost ready to publish the next installment - writing it has given me some focus. Watch this space.