Thank you. I try to create situations in some of my stories where the character has that element of disbelief, finds themselves in situations that are on the cusp of jeopardy, but takes the risk.
I think it works on a lot of levels, particularly tension. Like, I wanted her to believe, but it was also realistic that she didn't. Even without the kind of skeptic setup, I think it would work. Plus, waking up and wondering if it happened is a classic.
ya, I think that might be in the eye of the beholder, but that is what worked for me at least right? It looks like, all a dream, but then she finds the evidence. Like, it wasn't a twist, but emotionally, it satisfied me.
I’ve never read a story like this. Well written but a dash of kink. I bet she keeps coming back for more!! Fantastic job on this piece!!!
Thank you. I like my stories to have a dash of kink and a twist in the tale. Glad you enjoyed it.
That was very nice, just the right amount of disbelief by the narrator, before succumbing.
Thank you. I try to create situations in some of my stories where the character has that element of disbelief, finds themselves in situations that are on the cusp of jeopardy, but takes the risk.
I think it works on a lot of levels, particularly tension. Like, I wanted her to believe, but it was also realistic that she didn't. Even without the kind of skeptic setup, I think it would work. Plus, waking up and wondering if it happened is a classic.
Some might say classic - others that it's a bit of a cliche.
ya, I think that might be in the eye of the beholder, but that is what worked for me at least right? It looks like, all a dream, but then she finds the evidence. Like, it wasn't a twist, but emotionally, it satisfied me.