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John A. Brown's avatar

Simone, the "like" is based upon solidarity, and the fact that your writing is excellent here, as always. Though this would be a fun jaunt for some, does nothing for me. I'm all about the elegance and the sensuality--an SUV is way too "redneck" for me. And though not explicit in the story, I couldn't run away from a girl with tattoos fast enough--evokes the carnival side show or people at a high level of biological contamination. Call me an aristocrat! A matter of stylistic preference and what sets one's imagination alight, plus the romantic in me. Nevertheless, you write an erotic tale very well!

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

Ooof! I really enjoyed how bossy J was and the frenetic pace of it! Bravo

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