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John A. Brown's avatar

Simone, the "like" is based upon solidarity, and the fact that your writing is excellent here, as always. Though this would be a fun jaunt for some, does nothing for me. I'm all about the elegance and the sensuality--an SUV is way too "redneck" for me. And though not explicit in the story, I couldn't run away from a girl with tattoos fast enough--evokes the carnival side show or people at a high level of biological contamination. Call me an aristocrat! A matter of stylistic preference and what sets one's imagination alight, plus the romantic in me. Nevertheless, you write an erotic tale very well!

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Simone Francis's avatar

I agree that SUV is a bit 'redneck', probably a bit 'Essex' here in the UK (that'll get me into trouble) but I needed a big car and he was hardly going to drive a limo. As I said John, this is my fun stuff so thanks for the comment and like despite the fact that it's not your thing.

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John A. Brown's avatar

Understood, in all respects!😊

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

Ooof! I really enjoyed how bossy J was and the frenetic pace of it! Bravo

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Simone Francis's avatar

Thanks Posy. I get the impression she had been planning this for most of the evening.

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

Yeah seems like! Did you write a sequel, or leave it to reader imagination?

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Simone Francis's avatar

I’ve left it to the readers imagination

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Simone Francis's avatar

I bet that added a certain spice to the day.

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Simone Francis's avatar

It would be fun if you could tell one of them they were conceived in a hospital car park. I've heard of a few born there but that would be a different story to tell at parties.

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