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H. Zilfiger's avatar

Superb. A tautly written piece that packs so much into a few hundred words.

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Simone Francis's avatar

Thank you

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H. Zilfiger's avatar

It was the reference to salt and vinegar crisps that captured me. That's about as telling a character insight as a paragraph of prose.

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