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Pretty good--damned good, if you'll forgive the pun, Simone! And an excellent foray into some fantasy/supernatural/horror-adjacent worldbuilding. "Another Sword" indeed, to deal with the succubae? A lot more fun and unconventional than the standard fare. As I was reading through his initial narrative, the novel "The Keep" came to mind--the author's name escapes me now, but it involves a creepy castle in Romania in WWII, where occupying Germans have to tangle with some murderous, immortal entity imprisoned therein. Not a vampire, but some terrestrial being from a "prelapsarian" age, who can only be killed by a similarly-situated warrior guy who somehow knows about this problem who makes his way to the castle to challenge him in single combat. It was made into a terrible horror flick in the early '80s with Jurgen Prochnow as the German commander and Scott Glenn as the immortal good guy. Ian McKellen starred in an early role as a scholar of Slavic history brought in to consult. It was directed by Michael Mann, one of the best crime-drama guys out there--his only foray into horror. Weird "Tangerine Dream" synth soundtrack. Apparently, there's a far superior, full-length director's version out there which fleshes out the whole thing, but the book is so stupid, I have no interest in it. The novel is part of some story cycle about the battle between these "beings around since before mankind" for supremacy--or something or other--and the whole thing is so convoluted you just want the castle to collapse onto everyone before long so everybody dies. I also like your use of first-person POV, and it looks like you're going for more of a horror-centric serial this time around. Good job!

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