Well written with feeling. Additional descriptive details of the action would be icing on the cake and much appreciated. I very
much enjoy your writing. You achieve good character development with few words. You are quite a talented author. I look forward to reading more of your stories. 🤓
Thank you Ronald. Your comments are appreciated and the one about the descriptive details noted. It is always very useful to get feedback from readers.
Well written with feeling. Additional descriptive details of the action would be icing on the cake and much appreciated. I very
much enjoy your writing. You achieve good character development with few words. You are quite a talented author. I look forward to reading more of your stories. 🤓
Thank you Ronald. Your comments are appreciated and the one about the descriptive details noted. It is always very useful to get feedback from readers.