THIS exemplifies a pro-domme scene right here! Home run, Simone! Very, very well done--I love it. Dianna's got a scorching lady-boss aesthetic and a body to die for. I can just hear her snapping her commands to Alan, who's totally been broadsided by a stroke of amazing luck! He has no idea what awaits him, of course. The commands for him to strip, and her cold inspection of him, and the order for him to pleasure himself--then telling him to stop--10/10! You did a masterful job of showing how this "master of the universe" type has had his world thrown into a delightful chaos--a shock of entry into the world of submission and sexual adventure he'll never forget. Once he signed, that was it--reason gave way to desire. Dianna's reading him what his future under her tutelage will be like, and he 's loving every minute of it. Dianna and Stephanie have definitely done an incredible job planning these escapades, since Alan's got a rather eventful night ahead of him (the Viagra on standby is a hilarious touch!!!). On to the next part...
Oh, he's going to love every minute of it - maybe a little too much. I hope Dianna is exactly what one of my other subscribers asked for but I have a feeling she has got a darker side.
I wouldn't let darkness concern you. Such rarefied activities have appeal because of their taboo and forbidden character--the overturning of normality, inversion of conventional assumptions of societal power conventions, the antediluvian, atavistic, and primordial demonic forces lurking deep within our brains loosened from their daylight prisons and allowed to roam at will and indulge themselves...catharsis on steroids. If Dianna weren't into Darkness, she would be a lousy dominatrix. By extension, if Alan and Steph weren't already inclined that way, they'd be happy with a garden variety Friday night missionary position, mid-grade run through "open to procreation at all times," not so? I submit that any erotic tale dealing with power dynamics must have Darkness-sensitive characters pre-loaded, or it won't work. You're doing fine--let them play out!
Fantastic start! I do hope the Domme does get to have her way with the wife too, but that wasn’t necessarily in the contract though.
When she said any female voice, he had to have figured out that there was more than his wife waiting for him!
Oh yes, and, Oh yes. It all happens in this story. Alan (and Stephanie) are in for quite a ride. Thanks for your comments John.
Phew-ee! What a kinky premise. Alan sounds like he's going to lap this up, but it'll be a steep learning curve. I'm invested to learn more!
THIS exemplifies a pro-domme scene right here! Home run, Simone! Very, very well done--I love it. Dianna's got a scorching lady-boss aesthetic and a body to die for. I can just hear her snapping her commands to Alan, who's totally been broadsided by a stroke of amazing luck! He has no idea what awaits him, of course. The commands for him to strip, and her cold inspection of him, and the order for him to pleasure himself--then telling him to stop--10/10! You did a masterful job of showing how this "master of the universe" type has had his world thrown into a delightful chaos--a shock of entry into the world of submission and sexual adventure he'll never forget. Once he signed, that was it--reason gave way to desire. Dianna's reading him what his future under her tutelage will be like, and he 's loving every minute of it. Dianna and Stephanie have definitely done an incredible job planning these escapades, since Alan's got a rather eventful night ahead of him (the Viagra on standby is a hilarious touch!!!). On to the next part...
Oh, he's going to love every minute of it - maybe a little too much. I hope Dianna is exactly what one of my other subscribers asked for but I have a feeling she has got a darker side.
I wouldn't let darkness concern you. Such rarefied activities have appeal because of their taboo and forbidden character--the overturning of normality, inversion of conventional assumptions of societal power conventions, the antediluvian, atavistic, and primordial demonic forces lurking deep within our brains loosened from their daylight prisons and allowed to roam at will and indulge themselves...catharsis on steroids. If Dianna weren't into Darkness, she would be a lousy dominatrix. By extension, if Alan and Steph weren't already inclined that way, they'd be happy with a garden variety Friday night missionary position, mid-grade run through "open to procreation at all times," not so? I submit that any erotic tale dealing with power dynamics must have Darkness-sensitive characters pre-loaded, or it won't work. You're doing fine--let them play out!