Oooh. That was excellent. Great transition to the pool itself. The apparition was well done. Had an old novel feel to it. Swarthy is definitely a 20th century word, isn't it? Well done.
Thank you John. I think I am going to be digging deeper into some of these folklore tales. I have just read a couple that were quite discreetly sexy for the time so might get spiced up a bit.
Oooh. That was excellent. Great transition to the pool itself. The apparition was well done. Had an old novel feel to it. Swarthy is definitely a 20th century word, isn't it? Well done.
Thank you. That's the feel I was going for. As i mention in the footnote it was inspired by an early 20th Century story.
Delightfully unexpected- love a vengeful sense of justice- excellent 👌
Vengeful spirits, especially in female form, seem to be one of my tropes.
It’s not a bad ‘zone’ to explore
Interesting!
Thank you Bill
Thank you John. I think I am going to be digging deeper into some of these folklore tales. I have just read a couple that were quite discreetly sexy for the time so might get spiced up a bit.