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I like this. And the metaphor fits.

All erotica authors should display their strawberry:cream ratio.

Mine is probably 70:30, in favour of strawberries. The cream, when it happens, has to be viscid and sticky, the kind that leaves a crust at the corner of my mouth and coats my tongue long after the strawberries are gone. Which calls for more strawberries. Which call for more cream....

Gluttony is the Queen of Vices.

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A friend of mine used to frequently quote a Robert Heinlein character, 'Moderation is for monks - take big bites'. The cream in your story, Awakening The Innocent is definitely viscid. It is so delicious watching it ooze from the pot and waiting for it to drop.

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Jul 26Liked by Simone Francis

Loved this - and I like the characters 1st- then plot, then sex lol as I want the sex to be written properly and not overdone - unless it is a particular kink being talked about.

I remember Outrepen - I loved his work - he did a moon light flit lol

TY for including Juniper's serial

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Thanks May - does that mean more cream if it's whipped and less if it's vanilla flavoured?

I was trying to link to Outrepen but he has vanished.

I love Juniper's serial - I'm off to read the latest episode.

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Jul 28·edited Jul 28Liked by Simone Francis

Yes I had his email but that went too - i think his wife was not keen on him writing

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